Mugen-Hive -
青少年犯罪问题，如果不加以预防以及管制，那么这个社会性的问题就会像以上数据所显示出的一样，与日递增。Youth offenses question, if does not perform to prevent as well as thecontrol above, then this social question can like the data todemonstrate the dissimilarity, increases progressively with the date.
这对于一个国家的未来人才趋向发展以及社会安全问题都将造成很大的影响，当然，最重要的应该是青少年的美好未来可能也会因为疏忽教育与缺乏管制而受到严重影响。This will tend to the development as well as the society securityproblem regarding a national future talented person all has the verytremendous influence, certainly, most important should will be youngpeople"s glorious future possibly also can because the negligenceeducation with will lack the control to come under the seriousinfluence.
所以就青少年犯罪问题，国家应该尽可能实行早教育，从源头上遏制，加强社会治安综合治理,净化社会环境，并且加强对青少年工作的研究，以此做到彻底的防治对策。Therefore on the youth offenses question, the country should implementas far as possible early educates, contains from the source,strengthens the comprehensive maintenance of public security, thepurification social environment, and strengthens the research whichworks to the young people, to this achieves the thorough preventingand controlling countermeasure.
报社机构灵活的采用了搜集来的中国和美国的调查研究数据，举例，到80年代增到70%以上,至今仍居高不下，美国青少年杀人案件几乎占26个最发达国家青少年杀人案件总数的3/4。The newspaper office organization nimble has used Chinese and US"Sinvestigation and study data which collects, gives an example,increases to the 80"s to 70% above, until now still stayed at a highlevel, the American young people murder case nearly accounted for 26most developed countries young people murder case total 3/4.
来显示出问题的重点，不仅一目了然，并且很有说服力，以至最终达到明确显示该问题严重性的目的。Demonstrates the question the key point, not only is clear, and hasthe persuasive power very much, down to finally achieved is clearabout demonstrates this question grave goal.
CarieVinne -
Youth offenses question, if does not perform to prevent as well as the control above, then this social question can like the data to demonstrate the dissimilarity, increases progressively with the date. This will tend to the development as well as the society security problem regarding a national future talented person all has the very tremendous influence, certainly, most important should will be young people"s glorious future possibly also can because the negligence education with will lack the control to come under the serious influence. Therefore on the youth offenses question, the country should implement as far as possible early educates, contains from the source, strengthens the comprehensive maintenance of public security, the purification social environment, and strengthens the research which works to the young people, to this achieves the thorough preventing and controlling countermeasure. The newspaper office organization nimble has used Chinese and US"S investigation and study data which collects, gives an example, increases to the 80"s to 70% above, until now still stayed at a high level, the American young people murder case nearly accounted for 26 most developed countries young people murder case total 3/4. Demonstrates the question the key point, not only is clear, and has the persuasive power very much, down to finally achieved is clear about demonstrates this question grave goal.
再改改就可以了！
我好累。。。。 该给我分了吧。 好难翻译啊！
bikbok -
Youth commit-crime problem,without protection and prediction,the social problem will resemble what the stastic show,it will increase day by day.Maybe there will be huge influence to the future,the tendary,and the security,of course,the most important thing is still the future of education and protection.As far as this problem,in my opinion,our nation should act as possible as we can,do everthing we can do,fo example,ealier education ,prevent the original,promote the charge of social security ,controll the social enviroment and take more research of our new generation.
all of above will benefit the entirely rotection of Youth offense problem.
The newspaper insititution widely adopted the investigation stastics searched from China an USA.Take an example,the USA teenager murder matters take almost three fourths in all of 26 developed countries,and until 80s,even inreased above 70%,and never fell down.they use it to demonstrate the emphasis strongly,not only obviously ,but also instructively,finally,they made the achievement that show the importance of the problem specificly.
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阿啵呲嘚 -
Teenager crime problem, if don"t take in to prevent froed and control, so the problem of this society will be like what above data display, passing with day to increase.This will result in for a future talented person of nation inclining to development and social safe problems very great influence, certainly, the most important of should be a teenager of fine will also is influenced by severity probably in the future because the negligence educates and lacks control.So teenager crime problem, the nation should practice possibly to educate early, suppressing from the source head, strengthening a social public order to synthesize to manage, decontamination social milieu, and strengthen the research which works to the teenager, attains an exhaustive prevention and cure counterplan with this.
The news agency organization adopted to collect vividly of the inquisition research of China and the United States data, give examples, up to 80"s increase to 70% above and up to now still high, the American teenager kills people case to almost have 26 most flourishing and national teenagers to kill people case total amount of 3/4.To display the point of[with] problem, not only is clear at a glance, but also there is conviction very much, with go to end attain definitely a purpose of showing that problem seriousness.
寸头二姐 -
个人意见，这个文章出80分，肯定给你翻译好。
kikcik -
就为了要分 主谓搭配 都弄不清